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Tuesday, 27 August 2019

Why I Absolutely Love Summer

In class we had to give a description of what season we thought was the best and I chose summer. We had to put a intro and three paragraphs with a conclusion. I found this easy to start with then I struggled coming up with more ideas of why summer is the best but I kept going and did it.
What is your favourite Season?why? 


Don’t you love it when you go outside and feel the rays of sunshine on your face and the warm breeze blows through your hair, unless you are Mr Norman and have a bald head. Summer is my absolute favourite what is yours?

Summer is my favourite season because you get to go outside and go on hikes, also if it is really hot outside then thats your reason why your parents should get you an ice cream, and I do love a creamy delicious ice cream on a hot day.

Do you ever have enough time to go outside and play in winter I don’t, do you get so cold that your lips turn purple, I do, well in summer you don’t have to worry you can run outside and stay warm with the heat of the sun shining on you and you get to go to the pool or be with your family also your not stuck inside being bored.

Some of us love going to the beach to tan and some of us love lying in the sun waiting to crisp, Summer is basically the only time you can do this I mean you can’t do it in winter you will become an ice cube so Summer is the best time to tan and it is the best Season.

In Summer all the flowers and animals are basically fully grown because in spring the animals and flowers start to grow and in summer they are fully grown.

These are my reasons why summer is my favourite Season and why I think it's the best.

2 comments:

  1. Hi Greer, im Eamon from YMS.

    I like how you have added LOTS of writing before the picture I think that is good because If you add just the picture I think that It will just fill your blog and then you'll stop, but you have writing so yay. and also your question is cool, and my favourite season is summer so I can go outside!

    Did you think about having some more detail on your picture? That would make your blog post look more attracting an more and more people will look at it and think, wow, this blog post looks really eye catching, Ill comment!

    But also, how come you didn't add a cya or goodbye at the end? I mean, its not a crucial part of the blog, but it would be nice :)

    anyway, Cya!
    -Eamon

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  2. Hi Greer, im Hasan from YMS.

    I liked how you did a blog post about summer. It was cool how you put heaps of writing before the diagram or the picture. This blog post is cool because you write how summer is your favorite season and guess what greer summer is my favorite season too.

    When you made this blog post how did you feel of how it turned out. because to me it looks really sick (aka really cool) please replied to me how you felt.

    Why did you do a blog post about summer what inspired you to make a blog post this amazing about my favorite season out of all the other seasons.

    was your teacher proud of you.

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