In Matilda my reading group we have created another mindmup. The reading passage we had reminded me of star wars and it was a little different so I struggled a little bit but then i finished it and got some feedback. My feedback was that I didn't have to much information or to little which was good and I also explained what things meant but I could have worked on adding more capital letters at the start so i know to fix that and I got more feedback which said that I did a great job and I had related and not to much information but I got mixed up with a character but a little mistake was okay. I liked my feedback because most of it was good and I know to fix things next time.
Do you do mindmups?
whats a mistake I could have fixed?
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