The Avocado Drama

WALT in class we are learning about paragraphs and we had to go into groups of threes and create a story using scholastic story starters, our main character was an avocado and he plays a big part in the story. First we created the story then we made the picture book today I will be posting the picture book. During this I found it difficult because it took along time and it was hard to create the characters but in the end  I finished with my buddy's. Here is my picture book.

Enjoy

The Machine

In reading we have now started to do our own shared slideshow work and it is different but it seems a little bit easier and it doesn't take so long. I found this work easy but hard to find different example and explanations, but since I have done this many times it wasn't to hard. Also we were reading a fiction passage this week so that was one of the reasons why it was easier. This is my work.
Have you done this before?
what are things I could work on?