WALT in class we are learning about paragraphs and we had to go into groups of threes and create a story using scholastic story starters, our main character was an avocado and he plays a big part in the story. First we created the story then we made the picture book today I will be posting the picture book. During this I found it difficult because it took along time and it was hard to create the characters but in the end I finished with my buddy's. Here is my picture book.
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Thursday, 12 September 2019
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Hi Greer I'm Alvin from YMS I enjoied the part when the avacardo that ate the teacher that was quite creepy. did you think about smaller kid lokking at that?.
ReplyDeletewhy would the avacardo eat the teacher?. how did the cookie gang come?
kia ora my name is Connor I like the way you had Avocado.Did you think about the avocado Avocado? Why did you do this?
ReplyDeleteKia ora i'm Olivia from Yaldhurst Model school
ReplyDeleteI liked the part when the Avocado got turned into guacamole and that part was very funny to me.
Did you think about making a better prank on the teacher in your story because the whoopie cushion is a classic prank used all the time.
and I loved the story it was very interesting reading your story you should be proud of yourself.
You did you chose those characters?
Kind regards Olivia🐶
Kia ora Greer, I'm Amelia from Yaldhurst Model School.
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you put lots of cool pictures into your picture book. I also liked the cookie bandits.
This reminded me of when I made a new school uniform, probably because they made him into guacamole.
To improve, you could make the avocado pull a better prank like putting a noise thing on her chair and when she sits down it makes this funny noise. The whoopee cushion prank is old and classic.
Did you enjoy making this blog post?
It looks like you did!
Bye Greer, keep up the great work!
-Amelia 🦊
Hi Amelia, Thank you for commenting and yes I loved making this picture book and it was exciting coming up with all the different characters and pictures. And I will think of better pranks and jokes to make the story more funny next time.
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Greer
Hey Greer, I am Lucy from Yaldhurst Model school. I am Year 5. I like this blog becasue instead of writing the story, you made a Animation. I also like how he go turned in guacamole. That is very funny. Next time I think you could have told me about the proess. Keep up the great work Greer.
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From Lucy