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Tuesday, 20 August 2019

Reading Shared Slideshow

WALT in class for my reading group in week 2 we had to make and information we had to put it on a shared slideshow. i got some feedback on my information web for week two and it was that I could put some examples in and explain the actions a bit more so I took that feed back and used it in my week 4 slideshow. I found the week 4 slideshow easier because I understood things better and  used that feedback. altogether I enjoyed doing this it didn't take me to long and I found it difficult at the start but then kept on working on it.
have you done something like this before?
what do you think I could work on?

Week 2                                                                                                         

week 4

2 comments:

  1. Well done Greer, I like that you organised your ideas clearly using Mindmup. In the text about Roland, you have described the two characters well. Keep up the great work.

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    1. Sorry Greer,

      I was accidentally logged into the blog admin account when I wrote this feedback. Anyway you're working really hard.

      Ms Wilton

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