Best animal in the universe

W.A.L.T. use SEER in our paragraphs. in class we had a substitute teacher and his name was Mr Lee and for writing he taught us SEER, he made writing fun and it was really easy to learn SEER. After a while once we were getting the hang of SEER we had to write a paragraph about what the best animal in the world is and I think it is a..........

The best animal in the world is. A sea otter because they have some amazing facts about themselves, did you know that sea otters have 1 million hairs per square inch. Also they are cute looking animals. An example of why sea otters are cute, because the mother carries her baby on her belly and it is like the baby is using the mother as a tugboat. Another example is sea otters are very intelligent like when they go hunting they use a rock hold it under their arm and use it to smash open a clam. As a result, these are the reasons and examples of why sea otters are the best animals in the world.

Mr lee made writing fun for us and especially me because I think writing is the worst but I actually enjoyed learning SEER. do you like writing? and what do you think the best animal in the world is?