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Monday, 23 July 2018

My amazing life as a shoe

My life as a shoe


I was put on and my friend Mya the sock slid into me. My hair was done (laces).
I started walking, I wandered through the park with carlos the humans feet in me.
We stopped, Carlos got Ice cream, lucky him I said. As we were walking back Mya
the sock said she was starting to stink and get sweaty, I said don’t make me wet and
smelly, sorry said Mya I already have,AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA RRRRRGHHHH I
sighed. After that we went home, got washed and put back in our draws ready for the next day.

4 comments:

  1. good work but give more writing

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  2. Hi Stanley, thank you for your comment but what do you mean more writing.

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  4. I like your work it very funny why did you think about a shoe though it's kind of silly i really like how you made the life of a shoe. Next time you can add what kind of shoe it is? And what colour is the shoe?

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