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Tuesday, 25 July 2017

home sweet home

Home sweet home I live in a castle with the humans you see i'm different to them but they still love me. I am a dog. And one day I saw the little girl I lived with, her name was Lucy. fighting with her auntie I wondered what it was about. That night I was wokin by Lucy she grabbed me and jumped out the window then we ran to the bridge and we got on a boat and rowed down the lake and we fell asleep. The next morning we got stuck on shore and we found two pirates. The man asked why we were out here”. Lucy said her Auntie wouldn't let her see her father so i’m trying to find him. The guy went inside and found this poster if you find this girl named Lucy and bring her back you'll get 2000 $. the pirate went outside and asked what is your name little girl Lucy the guy said why don't you go back to your Aunt's no I'm never going back said Lucy, the pirate was walking towards her I barked at him we saw this boat and hopped on it. We sailed down the river. The pirates saw Lucy's auntie coming she asked where's the child. The pirate said we lost her you lost her! Well, do you know where she is. She sailed down the river the pirate said. Well let’s go the auntie said. Her auntie was riding down on a scooter and the pirates were in a jet. They raced down the river they saw her she started, speeding when she saw her auntie. Lucy and I hid behind the corner. We lost them. After that we found this old house we stopped the boat and hopped out and went to look we opened the door and, looked inside Lucy said we will stay until sunrise. Sometimes Lucy talks to me even tho i’m a dog. Me and lucy sat down and fell asleep. Next we heard this knocking on the door then lucy opened the door it was lucy's auntie, she marched in and tried to grab lucy. Lucy asked why are you here the auntie replied if you didn't come back we wouldn't get the thousand dollars from your father and we’d be poor. Lucy said you greedy and selfish then her auntie grabbed her took her, upstairs and locked her in a room.Lucy banged on the door but it was no use, All she wanted was to see her dad. The auntie said to Lucy's uncle that little girl just does not understand we need the money. Lucys aunties name was Plump Rump nobody ever called her that because she didn't like it. Lucys aunt turned up the fire then the telephone caught fire the fire went up the stairs and into the room that Lucy was in Lucy screamed for help we were trapped we did not know what to do then she grabbed me and we jumped out the window and got on the boat then we sailed away. Then this helicopter appeared and it was Lucy’s Dad he came and rolled down the ladder then Lucy picked me up and we climbed the ladder and then her father took us home. Lucy’s uncle and auntie were sent to Jail for 23 years and they were taught their lesson after they got out of prison they moved to auckland. Me and lucy and her father lived happily ever after.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Greer
    It's Isabel from Room 8, I like how you added so much detail to your story and it was funny. You also hooked the reader in by making it an exciting story. Maybe next time you could make the text bigger so it's easier to read. Also check your capital letters. I look forward to your next post.

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