WALT critically analyse texts. In reading we are learning about dung beetles, and what they do and what they are. One of the tasks we had to complete was to create a dung beetle that would survive better in the wild. I enjoyed doing this but I found it hard tracing the image of a dung beetle but i enjoyed adding affects. Please leave a comment and feedback so I can fix things and do better next time.
Kia Ora Greer! My name is Hana and I'm a year 5 from Yaldhurst Model School!
ReplyDeleteWow Greer! I love your new and improved Dung Beetle! He looks awesome! I bet he would be able to survive anywhere!
This reminds me of when I did an activity that also said to improve a Dung Beetle! I remember I gave it some sort of spikes somewhere on his body to help him fend off enemies!
Next time, you could try to make the title more interesting so more people would want to look at your blog! Like There's a new type of dung beetle in town! Or, Breaking News! New dung beetle species found! Or something like that.
Keep up the great work!
From Hana
Hello Greer,
ReplyDeleteI am Alan from Yaldhurst model school.
Great blog post. How did you think of such ideas.
If you want to improve the blog post write some more and you can improve the dung beetle by making the dung beetle shed its fur when it is summer and then its fur will reappear when it is winter.
Kind regards
Alan