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Wednesday, 19 September 2018

The Rolling Earth

The rolling earth 
My name is Jim I was walking down the street going to get a coffee. It was a nice day, blue sky warm breeze morning, the birds were singing and everybody was tucked up warm in bed. When all of a sudden the ground started to shake, I fell over and skinned my knee the statue of liberty fell over and the ground split open. Everyone ran out of their houses screaming and holding on tight to their children. Then suddenly out of the mist in the cracks in the ground dragons started appearing all the people were running to the sea and families were screaming for their lives. There were dragons everywhere I ran to the tallest building I could find and stayed in there. Suddenly a dragon swooped in and smashed the glass. I ran but it was right behind me, I grabbed one of the office chairs and through it at the the dragon but it just growled. Then I said ooooooooooh oooo, okay bye now then the dragons mouth opened and chomp. Whooooo it was just a dream or was it. Nope definitely not a dream I was inside a dragon's stomach the the dragon tipped upside down the earth was rolling. The dragon spat me out and took me to another planet were other humans were but I said no and went back to earth and I invented technology that would hold things still if the earth would roll but then one day the earth really tipped and everybody fell out into space and died. But for one boy who lived and stayed on the other planet rolling candy. And grew up with candy people but the earth kept on spinning and always will.

2 comments:

  1. Hi Greer, I really like your blog post. I like the part where that dragon spat you out and you said no. Next time you could use more punctuation.

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  2. Hi Tyler, thank you for your comment, i'll put more punctuation in next time.

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